You thought my first draft was c-cerebral and tepid? Only the plot and the dialogue. But...
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David Shayne:
You thought my first draft was c-cerebral and tepid?
Helen Sinclair:
Only the plot and the dialogue. But this...
David Shayne:
Was-was-was there nothing in the original draft that you feel was worth saving?
Helen Sinclair:
The stage directions were lucid. Best I've ever seen... and the color of the binder. Good choice.
David Shayne:
Thank you. I've always had a flair for stage directions.
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You thought my first draft was cerebral and tepid Only the plot and dialogue
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But this Was Was Was there nothing in the original draft
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that you feel is worth saving
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The stage directions were lucid Best I've ever seen
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And the color of the binder Good choice Thank you
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I always had a flare for stage directions
Clip duration: 23 seconds
Views: 93
Timestamp in movie: 00h 55m 50s
Uploaded: 17 November, 2022
Genres: comedy, crime
Summary: In New York in 1928, a struggling playwright is forced to cast a mobster's talentless girlfriend in his latest drama in order to get it produced.
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