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I'm not sure it had the vigilance or depth that you're capable of

I'm not sure it hadthe vigilance or depth that you're capable of.I just wasn't fully...

You • S01E03 • 2018

I'm not sure it hadthe vigilance or depth that you're capable of.I just wasn't fully invested. Interesting, Blythe. How do we maintainthe reader's attention? We infuse the universal with painful specificity, or they simply turn the page. Exactly. My worst fear... and I'm notcommenting on Yuri's poem, per se, is not to be badbut unremarkable. - Unremarkable.- That is the fear. I hope this was helpful, Yuri. I think that does it for today. Next up is... Blythe. And Beck. Send a piece of your choosingto myself and your fellow classmates,and we'll review on Thursday

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I'm not sure it had the vigilance or depth

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that you're capable of I just wasn't fully invested

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Interesting Blythe

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How do we maintain the reader's attention

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We infuse the universal

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with painful specificity

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or they simply turn the page

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Exactly

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My worst fear and I'm not commenting on Yuri's poem

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per se is not to be bad but unremarkable

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Unremarkable That is the fear

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I hope this was helpful Yuri

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I think that does it for today

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Next up is Blythe

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And Beck

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Send a piece of your choosing to myself

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and your fellow classmates and we'll review on Thursday

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لا أرى فيها اليقظة ولا العمق اللذين تستطيع الكتابة بهما

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لم أتحمس لها كثيرا

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هذا مثير للاهتمام يا بلايث

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كيف نحافظ على انتباه القارئ

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نمزج بين العام والخاص المؤلم

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وإلا قلب القارئ الصفحة بالضبط

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أخشى ما أخشاه ولا أعل ق على قصيدة يوري في حد ذاتها

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ألا تكون كتابتي سيئة بل غير مميزة

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غير مميزة هذا ما أخشاه

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هل أفادك هذا يا يوري

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أعتقد أننا سنكتفي بهذا اليوم

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بعد ذلك بلايث و بيك

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أرسلا قطعة من اختياركما لي ولزملائكما

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وسنراجعها يوم الخميس

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Ich vermisse deine gewohnte Umsicht und Tiefe

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Ich war nicht ganz dabei

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Interessant Blythe

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Wie hält man die Aufmerksamkeit des Lesers

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Wir erfüllen das Universelle mit schmerzhafter Bestimmtheit

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Sonst wird umgeblättert Genau

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Meine größte Angst wobei ich das nicht auf Yuris Gedicht beziehe

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ist nicht schlecht zu sein sondern beliebig

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Beliebig Das ist die Angst

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Hilft das Yuri

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Dann sind wir fertig

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Die Nächste ist Blythe Und dann Beck

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Schickt mir und allen einen Text eurer Wahl

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zur Besprechung am Donnerstag

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Rasanya itu tidak menunjukan bakatmu

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Dan aku kurang tertarik

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Menarik Blythe

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Bagaimana caranya kita mempertahankan minat pembaca

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Jika bisa selipkan faktor yang menyedihkan

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secara spesifik

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untuk mencegah kehilangan minat mereka

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Tepat sekali

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Bukannya meng komentari puisi Yuri

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tapi bagi itu biasa saja

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Aku harap kamu terbantu Yuri

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Cukup untuk pelajaran hari ini

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Giliran berikutnya adalah Blythe

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dan Beck

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Jangan lupa mengirim copy an nya padaku

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dan semua teman sekelas kita akan meninjaunya pada hari kamis

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この白人特権階級の象徴を始末する前に

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正体を見極めないと

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彼の好きなものは何だ

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フェアじゃない

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テストするなら最新の本で

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オンザロードは未読か

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伝統的な方法以外でも読むことはできる

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書評でとか

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なるほど

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君は詐欺師だ

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そのクソ本を今読むよサディストめ

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ここから出たい

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君の新情報だベック

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この男が分相応だと思ってるね

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少し顔色が悪いぞ

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Было не достаточно глубоко и чутко

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как ты это умеешь Меня не захватило

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Интересно Блайт

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Как удержать внимание читателя

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Описать обыденность так

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чтобы она стала невероятной

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или он перевернёт страницу

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Именно

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Мой страх и я не говорю о стихотворении Юри

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это написать не что то плохое а что то заурядное

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Заурядное Это страх

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Надеюсь это было полезно Юри

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Думаю на сегодня всё

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Следующая Блайт

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И Бэк

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Выберите статью

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и мы обсудим её на занятии в четверг

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Infundimos lo universal

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con una dolorosa especificidad

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o simplemente dan vuelta a la página Exacto

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Mi peor miedo y no estoy criticando el poema de Yuri

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per se es no ser malo sino ordinario

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Ordinario Ese es el miedo

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Espero que fuera de ayuda Yuri

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Creo que es todo por hoy

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Lo siguiente es Blythe

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Y Beck

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Envíenme un pedazo de su elección a mí

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y a sus compañeros de clase y lo revisaremos el jueves

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Duration

43 seconds

Views

24

Timestamp in Movie

00:11:03

Uploaded

Mar 09, 2026

Season

1

Episode

3

Genres

crime, drama, romance

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Movie Summary

A dangerously charming, intensely obsessive young man goes to extreme measures to insert himself into the lives of those he is transfixed by.